
By Myra Ahmed

A lot of your potential B2B customers are viewing your LinkedIn company page. But the question is:
Is your LinkedIn page banner a little too… bland?
I reviewed 40+ LinkedIn pages for SaaS and most design banners had:
❌ No actual text
❌ Fluffy taglines like “Innovate better”
❌ A funding announcement: “We raised series B!”
❌ Or a call for recruitment: “We’re hiring!”
…but your banner text should ideally speak to your potential customers. Otherwise it’s a lost opportunity to engage them with a powerful message.
How to write the text for a punchy banner
The text on your banner should make it easy for prospects to instantly understand:
1) What your product does
2) How it’s differentiated from competitors
Hit ‘em with a killer first impression.
Let’s look at real banner messaging examples that are no-bullshit and super punchy.
4 types of LinkedIn banner text for SaaS companies (with examples!):
1) Big pain-point
Focus on the problem you solve.
“Tired of being tracked online?” (DuckDuckGo) |
“You’re losing millions on SMS verification” (Prelude) |
2) The better way to do {customer use case}
Explain the job-to-be-done.
“The fastest way to save 60% on AWS” (Pump.co) |
“The simplest way to do product analytics” (June.so) |
3) We’re the {product category} for {ICP}
Give a clear positioning statement.
“Market research platform for B2B” (Wynter) |
“Employee app loved by Gen Z” (All Gravy) |
4) Explain how your product works
In a nutshell – what can customers do with your software?
“Go from design to code, in a flash” (Locofy.ai) |
“Identify your warmest leads and engage them instantly” (Warmly,) |
All the above examples are clear and concise. So ICPs aren’t left confused.
Next steps:
Open up your company page on LinkedIn. What do you think – is the text on your banner clear?
If your banner needs a punch-up, you can use the above examples as inspo. ✊💫

Writer: Myra Ahmed
Punchy copywriter for LinkedIn ads and landing pages.
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