How to write a punchy SaaS competitor comparison page – using the Them vs. Us approach
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By Myra Ahmed

SaaS Competitor Comparison Pages

A lot of SaaS competitor comparison pages play it way too safe. Even though that’s where your prospect makes a buying decision. 👀

❌ These comparison pages usually don’t address the competitor’s weaknesses.
❌ Often contain generic messaging like “our intuitive UI!” and “great customer support!”

I get it: you want to be careful around publicly criticizing a competitor.

But how else will your prospects know what makes your competitor weak and your product strong…?

That’s why I’d advise you to include a “Them vs. Us” comparison on your page.

Use the punchy “Them vs. Us” approach to SaaS competitor comparison pages

ClickUp highlights each competitor’s weakness in contrast to their strength:

Monday comparison page headline = “Monday is all over the place.”

Then ClickUp’s comparison page highlights these pain-points and capabilities…

Them:

  • Rigid pre-built solutions.
  • Only offer task management.
  • You have to use multiple apps just to get work done.

Us:

  • Customize projects with fields, tags and views.
  • Offer task management and chat, audio and video calls.
  • Use one app instead of 10.


✦ Jira comparison page = “For an app focused on sprints, it sure is slow.”

The ClickUp’s comparison page highlights these pain-points and capabilities…

Them:

  • You can’t make changes without a trained admin.
  • You need to install a hundred apps and plugins, e.g. Confluence and Loom.
  • Project decisions are buried in DMs and random channels.

Us:

  • Devs, PMs and designers can customize projects with fields, tags and views.
  • Manage tasks, collaborate in docs, and share video clips – without ever leaving ClickUp.
  • Send messages in ClickUp, everyone can link chat history and create tasks.

See how simple and impactful the “Them vs. Us” approach is?
There are two ways to go about it.

2 ways to differentiate on your competitor comparison pages:

1) Talk about features (like ClickUp does).

2) Use quotes from your customers that highlight your superiority.
For example, here’s a testimonial from Cognism’s comparison landing page (against ZoomInfo):

“We struggled to find accurate data in EMEA with other vendors.

Cognism is the key player in EMEA for contact data, so we signed and never looked back.”

That’s how you build your prospect’s confidence.

They’re trying to compare your product’s capabilities and price against other brands… so give them juicy tidbits on your comparison page.

That way, your prospect has a solid story they can sell to their internal team to get buy-in.

Next steps:

Create 1 unique page per competitor. Focus on a differentiation narrative that highlights your competitor’s inferiority.

E.g. they’re built only for a certain type of user… their UX is too complex… they’re expensive, etc.

Then back up your claims by comparing features and/or highlighting quotes from customers comparing you to your competitor.

You got this! 👊

Writer: Myra Ahmed

Writer: Myra Ahmed

Punchy copywriter for LinkedIn ads and landing pages.

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